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Nothing.

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Literature Text

You build me up
You tear me down.
I am what you say:
Nothing without you.
Ahh, the things I write when I think too much. XD
I wrote this in school today. I just thought of it. =P
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As far as the poem itself goes, I love it. You packed such a punch into so few words.
As far as the meaning goes, I don't love it! You most DEFINITELY are not "nothing" without ANYONE! You are a wonderful person & a great friend. From the time we first started talking, you've always been there for me & made sure that I knew I could talk to you at any time. You encouraged me when I was down, & kept encouraging me when I wasn't. You made me laugh when I just wanted to give up, & you told me over & over that things would get better. YOU made a difference in my life WITHOUT anyone being a part of that. You, by yourself, can do great things. I'm not saying that you don't need anyone, but you aren't nothing without them &, from what I've witnessed & experienced, people who believe they'd be nothing without someone allow that someone to treat them as if they already are nothing & you deserve so much better than that. Don't make me come down there, miss penguinfish! xD
sorry for the long comment but i lurve you! :iconilavplz: